Chuunin Exams: Evil vs. Ryan

So the time has finally come, huh? It all boiled down to this moment, Moku thought. Here and now is where I impress Raikage-Sama and make him realize that he has no choice but to promote me. Here and now is where I prove the strength of my village to these Leaf weaklings! Here and now is where I prove MYSELF to the SHINOBI WORLD!!

On this day, the song of determination beat in Moku's ears drowning out everything else. He would not lose this fight, and he COULD not lose this fight, because by all means, everything rested on this fight. The only other Kumogakure Genin had failed the first round, and as such, Moku was the only one left. A thought struck Moku's mind. This village is where Moku's father had been born and where he had died. And so now Moku heard his name called. He got to fight in the first round. Nice. He could prove himself early.

Moku was wearing a black robe, hooded, that concealed everything about him, and he carried his katana in his hand, inside its scabbard. Moku was going to pull off a little trick he had inherited from his father, although he would not reveal such technique until now. He was toying with a scroll under his robes, though his opponent could not see it, could not see even the movement underneath. Moku's face was shadowed but from underneath his hood, Moku's eyes glowed red, and the Tomoe of his Sharingan.

Moku looked down to the proctor, a man by the name of Konohamaru Sarutobi, the acclaimed apprentice of the Hokage, Naruto Uzumaki, studying him for a bit. Finally Moku decided to respond to the calling of his name, with a casual "I am present." As if these words marked the beginning of the fight, the audience completely stiffened, as if they feared Moku and his currently dark presense. And perhaps they did, for Moku gave off a strong sense of hatred at the moment. For this very arena is where Sasuke Uchiha himself had been, the who had murdered his own brother, and the man who had murdered Moku's father. Moku seemingly melted into the arena because of his graceful and slick movement. He was not fast, but neither was ne slow, nor of average speed. He just moved when he needed to move and timed his movements precisely when they needed to be timed. This gave off the illusion of Moku being a highly skilled shinobi, on the level of a Jounin even. Of course he was not, but the best illusions were not always genjutsu.

Moku heard the calling of the name of his opponent. Tsuko Hatake. At this calling, Moku was annoyed. His first fight was a disgrace to his own true bloodline. Moku looked into the lineup of opponents scanned them. Three of them struck his attention. The first was a man with dark brown hair and black glasses. And with glasses in mind, Moku noticed a certain disruption in the boy's chakra flow of his eyes. A sealed doujutsu perhaps? Moku contemplated this and moved on. The next who brought his attention was a man who looked surprisingly like Kakashi, the Copy Ninja. In fact, he and Moku's opponent could even be brothers, though their chakra flow was completely different and thus Moku concluded otherwise. This man had a powerful air about him, and he was newly induced with a powerful emotion. Moku moved on to the next, a female from the Mist. She resembled him a bit and had bright red hair. Her chakra flow was quite similar to Moku's own and his mother's. But... No, Moku dismissed this possibility.

Moku next looked up into the Kage box. Darui-sensei was there, as well as the Kazekage, Gaara of the Desert, Naruto Uzumaki, the Hokage, and the Mizukage, Mei. Moku finally turned to Tsuko Hatake. "I guess it is you who I shall be fighting. Tell me. How have you come to achieve the Sharingan?." Konohamaru Sarutobi turned his attention to Moku and his opponent. "Are you two ready to begin?"

Tsuko stepped out of line. Making his presence clear, he hid his chakra. No need in giving the foe an edge. If his opponent knew his true strength. The fact that Tsuko was so calm bothered him. He should be nervous right now. Possibly the toughest opponent in the Genin group was standing right before him. He seemed... Older.

With the new-found mastery of one handed jutsu would come in hand. He braced himself and nodded at the proctor.

Finally, it was time to begin. Time to let the fun take hold of Moku and to let the warm embrace of battle caress him into its loving arms. Moku wanted to just let loose. But he knew the Raikage had given him a duty to perform and he would not let him down. So, he let go of his daydream, recognizing the time to be serious. Moku, holding his blade out before him at arms length, slowly unsheathed it and hooked the scabbard to his belt within his robes, and then, it too, was concealed within Moku's benevolent form. So his opponent didn't answer him... he chuckled, an almost evil chuckle. Good, he passed that test.

Almost before one could percieve what happened, Moku sprang into action. From within his robe, with his right hand, his free hand, emerged 3 shuriken, each enhanced with the Raiton, increasing their speed and strength to massive amounts. The first curved left as if it were a slider pitch, and was acheduled to hit on the left side of Moku's opponent, at his knee cap, and would completely disable that knee were it to hit. The next slid just like the other would hit Moku's opponent's ribcage on his right side, and it would break the rib as well as puncture his opponent's lungs. The final shuriken Moku threw in a vertical curve so that it was scheduled to hit the top of his opponent's head and smash through his skull. It would be lethal. Were Moku's opponent to jump, the third shuriken would still hit him. Were he to sidestep in either direction he would be hit by the corresponding shuriken. Stepping backward could not even save his opponent because the vertically curved shuriken was still moving forward. Were Moku's opponent to drop prone it would still hit the back of his knee, disabling it. Even blocking these shuriken by means of a normal weapon would be impossible because with the enhanced Raiton they would smash through said weapon.

The log dropped to the ground coated in kunai. Substitution jutsu was too easy.
Tsuko decided it was better to go on the offensive now.

"SHARINGAN"

Seeing inside his opponents inner thoughts was amazing. So much anger in this one soul. And Tsuko thought he hated his life. This boy was... a monster. A fiend. It was now his job to eliminate this danger. He had to do it.

"Fire Style: Great Fire Ball Jutsu"

'This jutsu will give me time to start my next attack' , thought Tsuko

Heh. Not even close.

Moku, tossing his katana just a foot into the air in order to have time to do a hand sign, smirked and chuckled, seemingly engulfed by his opponent's fireball. It was merely part of his plan however, because just as the heat was too unbearably hot, performed Body Flicker Technique, snatching his katana from the air and moving behind his opponent.

Almost before he was there, Moku stabbed at his opponent's back, aiming for the lungs. It would not kill him, but it would definitely take him out of the fight. As a user of the Sharingan, Moku knew its weaknesses. His opponent could not see through the fireball if Moku timed it correctly because his vision was blocked by his own chakra. Moku timed this so that just as his opponent thought the Fireball should be getting to him, he would receive Moku's katana in his back. Moku's opponent could not see behind him with the Sharingan, so this might just be over this quickly. He even avoided the use of a puff of smoke so as for maximum undetectability.

Moku had to win this fight. He just had to. He absolutely refused to let his village down, and Darui-sensei flashed in his mind. It was that morning Moku had woken up after Suko's death, and... the Raikage had vowed to make him stronger. He refused to let those efforts go to waste.

Tsuko smiled behind his mask as he watched his clone chopped down. This man wanted to be a jonin so badly. Hes just embarrassing himself at this point. There was no use in trying. Being beaten by a teen would deem him a genin for good. But then again, Tsuko himself trained until he sweated blood. Literally. He cpuldnt lose now. Dad and master lee would kill him.

He would simply watch, in hiding, while his opponent tires himself out. Mind Clones were Tsukos specialty at this point. Theyre too easy.

Ermmm... no. 1. Waaaaay past 3 days, and you deleted my post saying that. 2. You never activated any sort of clone jutsu. 3. It cannot be gen because Sharingan sees through it.

1. I discussed the problem with the other 2 admin. We came to the conclusion based off my given evidence that i had valid reasoning for not responding. They suggested deleting the misc. posts and responding. If you dont believe me, ask them.

2. I mentioned specifically that the fireball was a diversion for my next attack

3. I dont have to see you with my sharingan if im hiding in a different location. Any eyes could see that.

Any more arguments in need of being opposed?

Yes, I do actually.

1. They probably are just afraid to go against the founder, but that does not matter, I cannot change what the other two said.

2. Mentioning it is a diversion does not matter in the slightest, because you never actually DID the technique. You never specifically said it, and you have to. Otherwise you could change what you were going to do.

3. That answer was completely out of context, this is because I never said anything about YOU seeing ME. What I said was that MY Sharingan would see through a genjutsu. And besides this, you have to have direct eye contact with me to CAST the genjutsu.

Well Ryan you cant just say your clone got chopped down you have to actually use the clone jutsu or whatever. If you used a gen you have to explain how you caught your opponent in the genjutsu. Cuz if that's the case whenever im bout to be hit I can just say my opponent hit a clone and avoid hit forever.

Its sad its come to playing logic nazi. If you insist on tearing at eachothers posts for the mere feeling of satisfaction, then ill play along.

1. I made it clear i had eye contact

2. One sharingan user can affect another user with sharingan and considering my genjutsu is more than twice yours, you cant just shake It off.

3. If you use body flicker and then grab your sword, you can only have moved a couple feet implying that you were still close enough to grab your sword. After that, you would be hit by the fireball.

4. If you body flickered behind me, you would have no sword.

5. You are just barely faster than me. You do not have a major speed advantage over me. I am able to keep up with your movement.

I can literally play this game all day. Any more problems?

~Sigh~ You are literally wrong about everything you just said (Except eye contact, I do not feel like reading back to check.) But even so, you have to trick ME into looking into your eyes. Otherwise you could gen anyone all day.

A Sharingan user cannot use genjutsu on another because a Sharingan user can tell when they are under a genjutsu by noticing a disturbance in both fighters' chakra flows. Genjutsu skill has no impact on that, and the reason Tsukuyomi works is because even if you know you are in a gen, its effects take hold immediately, not allowing the victim to break it.

Body Flicker is merely movement, not teleportation or transportation, and as such, while running under the influence of Body Flicker, I can grab my sword.

Play it all you want, you will lose. You even have Tmac agreeing with me. Seriously, understand rules before founding an RP site.

And inevitably youre not fully correct again. Itchachi was able to use Genjutsu on both Kakashi and Sasuke. And why was this? His Sharingan abilities were superior to theirs.

Also Eye contact is implied between people. If we carried out every positioning of our characters how much would we have to type? Would you rather we worry about blinking as well?

Tmac isnt agreeing with you, he simply stated not to abuse the clone jutsu would not work repetitively. Also questioning his allegiances and loyalties is not the best thing to do.

Body flicker is swift enough to where you cannot fully grab the katana, mainly because the katana is still acting at regular speed.

I will play it all i want. And im not scared to lose. But i know i wont.

If you have such a problem with this site, feel free to leave and make your own. I refuse to restrict my members. I cant say im sorry for that. If you wanna make your own role play where everyone has to act out every single action, go ahead. Good luck with getting members to stay ;D

Honestly, I have no intention of leaving, however, rules-tight sites ALWAYS have more people than this.

I have already explained to you why Itachi was able to perform Genjutsu on Kakashi and on Sasuke, except for their fight in the Uchiha hideout. In that fight, Itachi even EXPLAINED to Sasuke, that he layered two genjutsu on top of eachother, so when he released one, he did not release the other, and therefor overlooked it.

Eye contact is not implied, and it is NEVER implied, especially not in a Naruto RP because of shit like this, the Sharingan.

About the Body Flicker... dude, did you even read what you posted? You can EASILY grab the katana, though it would likely sting like shit. Reason being: I had not said I had taken off yet, I was still stationary when I grabbed the katana, and Body Flicker does not launch you, it merely allows you to run extremely fast by concentrating your chakra, but even if I was moving at full speed, I could catch it, it was right by my hand after all, I even specified that.

Im done trying to explain physics to you. As for the other cites always having more users;

Its easy to compare numbers. Sure they have more users. Do i care? Not really. You know why? I would easily trade 500 members for the 15 that we have. And do you know why? Because these guys are far cooler than any other members you could possibly compare them to.

Due to the banning of Evilpath. Im Dq'ing him

Tsuko moves to round 2